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Open Poetry #15

need a title?help

wpwpoet
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since 2001-07-25

Posts 99

0 posted 2001-08-08 06:44 PM

any Ideas for a title?
I was thinking of Kashmir Essence
what do you think?

The breeze lifts a soft
sweet fragrance of
sunshine
and I dreamed a little
A scent of musk and
spice, warmed my
soul
With a silk and kashmir
caress
and I dreamed a little
soft sweet fragrence of
sunshine...
co012500wpw

[This message has been edited by wpwpoet (edited 08-09-2001).]

Constance
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since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

1 posted 2001-08-08 06:52 PM

wpwpoet,

Fragrant Dream? Sweet Illusion?

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-08 06:54 PM

"sunkissed daydreams and perfumed skies"

????

liked it... nice imagery...thanks for the read

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 08-08-2001).]

Constance
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since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

3 posted 2001-08-08 06:55 PM

wpwpoet,

Fragrant Dream? Sweet Illusion? Sachet?

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-08-08 07:03 PM

Very pretty! How about Soft Scents?

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

5 posted 2001-08-09 12:20 PM

Scents Sense

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-08-09 01:58 PM

WPWPoet~
Nice imagery.

Perhaps~

Dreaming ~ Makes Scents To Me

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-08-09 09:20 PM

whispering sweet?
Nah, I'm not good at titles. But this is a very pretty write, flows lightly and magically.
Sandra

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

8 posted 2001-08-09 11:00 PM

Scent of essential ascent

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-08-11 11:16 AM

hmmmmmmmmmm. . . Essence of Silk??

well, whatever title you decide on. . .it's a great poem. . .

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