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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

0 posted 2001-07-13 03:54 PM

The Voice

by Michael

There is a voice
that cries within the night.

Though faint it is,
I’ve heard it many times.

I’ve walked beneath
both stars and rain
in search that I might find,
and found to my surprise

that voice was mine.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-13 03:58 PM

ah listening to ourselves..and recognizing the voice..is quite an achievement..

nicely done..This I truly enjoyed reading and thinking about.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-13 04:09 PM

Wonderful! Profound!!

ethereal and almost cosmic

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

3 posted 2001-07-13 04:46 PM

Sure beats tinitus! Now, the question is: what was it saying?

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

4 posted 2001-07-13 06:00 PM

A wonderful little poem. Made me smile.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2001-07-13 06:11 PM

yes, sometimes if we but listen, we can hear that voice, and learn from it! Michael this is so perfect in thought and feel...

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2001-07-13 06:57 PM

Michael...I liked the way you wrote this...simple, yet profound.

magnolia
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since 2001-05-05

Posts 16

7 posted 2001-07-13 07:59 PM

This makes one think.. I like it alot.

Magnolia

walker
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since 2001-02-11

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Florida

8 posted 2001-07-13 08:00 PM

I like this one very much!

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2001-07-13 10:04 PM

the voice is always the hardest to sometimes hear....you have said this with your brilliance and style....

Greeneyes~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-07-13 10:21 PM

Perfect write, Michael. Wow, the truth in this one ings out loud and clear. Wonderful!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-07-14 11:30 AM

ahhh. . . but do we listen to it??? therein lies the tale my friend. . .

well done. . . you managed to speak and to be spoken to. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

12 posted 2001-07-26 03:06 AM

Auguste, your poem touched my heart and I gotta say I'm sooooo glad 2 have caught this one tonite cuz it's a keepsake4me...

Thanx4SharingPoetFriend
HugsNsmiles
*~coco~*

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

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Pennsylvania

13 posted 2001-07-26 07:49 AM

Very lovely in thought and phrase
Liz

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

14 posted 2001-07-27 11:54 AM

Just POWERFUL my friend. 1derful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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passing shadows
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15 posted 2004-05-05 03:37 AM

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