Open Poetry #15 |
If I Had A Penny |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
If I had a penny For every thought Ive had of you I'd have a copper mountain High as the sky so blue. And if I made a wish On every penny in that hill I'd wish for you to love me And that you always will. I'd never spend a penny Of the wishes I had made I'd keep them close inside my heart And never let them fade. Pennies arent as precious From a riches point of view But I'll gather these pennies every day Because penny wishes do come true. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ This is full of lovely thoughts. I am reminded of the 'penny for your thoughts' saying ... Very nicely said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
my twin, this is wonderful, and hopeful, and I collect pennies. Maybe I should start wishing with them!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was simply delightful to read out loud! ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Seems to me I can count on this as being a keeper... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
If we had a wish for every penny - Wouldn't that be kewl?.. I like this one lots, PF.. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I collect pennies and always feel "rich" when they pile up and I love the thought behind this one, Paula. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I throw mine into wishing wells, guess it's all the same dream. I liked your poem alot. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Paula, I liked this a lot. Cool title Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Very good Paula, one for the library! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful flowing thoughts Paula....well written....you've still got the touch! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Paula, I really enjoyed this one! - especially the last stanza Melissa~ |
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