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Yes, It's Me Inside
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Yes, It's Me Inside |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Open up your eyes I would be inside... I've been waiting here For so long it seems I could be the one You saw in your dreams I could be the one Holding you at night We would shine on down To another life Nothing else is known But a gentler sound We would be alone Look at what we've found I am in your life I am in your heart But it all began Where love waits to start Open up your eyes Yes it's me inside I could never lie I could never hide …to another life Would you be my wife? Open up your eyes Yes it's me inside… [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-07-2001).] |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Now that is a proposal that no woman could refuse.I hope you don't miss the 5 stars.LOL paladin |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
on your birthday, you pen a poem as a gift for another.... that is what makes you a WOW... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
heheh it's my bday tomorrow but yuh |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Fantabulous my friend |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hope she likes your poem and Happy Birthday. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hope she likes your poem and Happy Birthday. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Happy Birthday!!!!!! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Happy Birthday Walt~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Your poem says, A man with big heart, we say Happy Birthday. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
this is pretty neat. it made me think of a reflection of oneself inside of his or her lovers eyes. whether or not their eyes are opened the person is still there. most 'for your eyes only' cleverly beary. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i wish i could fix the stuttering line i don't like but yuh thank you all |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
who else would it be??? there is none like you walt. . . great job my friend. . .  -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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