Open Poetry #15 |
In The Melt Of Twilight |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
In The Melt Of Twilight ~*Marge Tindal*~ Meet me in the melt of twilight Sway me as the moon comes out to play Dip me a cup of starlight fizzing Bubbling across the Milky Way Periscope the sisters of the Pleiades In flight from Orion of greatest might Hold me in constellation's beauty Through the romance of the night Color me indigo with brilliance Under this sky in sparkling array Meet me in the melt of twilight After the sun has ceased the day In this hush of twilight cascading Whisk me quickly into your arms In the melt of twilight falling Let's experience night's sweet charms ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
I got my telescope ready...ahh, very nice, Marge..sigh, I just knew when that moon got full...hug and a very gentle smile with love |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Oh, boy, that sounds romantic to me...what an enchanting write, Marge...I love it! sp it was love that first drew me, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See why I leave? For the beauty of it all... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I must go to the desert to see stars like that, but through love's eyes...the possibilities are endless. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I went all mooney over this romantic one that is for sure. This put me in mind of Perry Como, want to sing it together now, and a 1, and a 2, and a 3...... "Don't let the stars Get in your eyes Don't let the moon Break your heart Love blooms at night, In daylight it dies Don't let the stars Get in your eyes Or keep your heart from me For some day I’ll return And you know You're the only one I'll ever love" ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- You've done it again...another wonderful write inspired by the nightsky... I love this... "Meet me in the melt of twilight Sway me as the moon comes out to play Dip me a cup of starlight fizzing Bubbling across the Milky Way" Lovely, and sooooo romantic.. love ya, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ You know that moonlit sky does romantic things to the notions in my head. *Sharing info on the graphic - quote: SnowPants~ Thanks. It does make for a romantic setting. Karilea~ Sometimes you just gotta get out and keep looking up ! It is a beautiful sight. Martie~ And I'll bet you found 'endless possibilities' on your trip ! Mysteria~ You KNOW I love Perry Como songs ! Thanks ... and ... I swiped your moonie ! Vicky~ Tee-Hee ! It was one of those 'car' tunes ! Of course me little romantic muse sang it to me and I just had to 'customize' it to fit the graphic ! *Hugs All* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Five stars - to add to your already teeming sky... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Color me indigo with brilliance Under this sky in sparkling array Meet me in the melt of twilight After the sun has ceased the day In this hush of twilight cascading Whisk me quickly into your arms In the melt of twilight falling Let's experience night's sweet charms ============================ Your celestial muse was on high for this beauty... love the imagery and romantic notion of this star-struck gift of your pen. BEAUTIFUL Margie... me wont you sing me your poetry |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Now I have to know what picture this is of. Unromantic, I know, but not constellations. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thank you so very much. This little sparkler just had to shine her light. JanetMarie~ Hugs, doll ! That little muse was in her glory. MirrorMan~ Explanation above ... but placing the link here and have also sent you an e-mail. Hope you enjoy ! *Link to other spectacular photos from the Hubbel- http://oposite.stsci.edu/pubinfo/PR.html Hope everyone enjoys them ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW!!! Need I say more?!! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge This was so very beautiful. There's nothing like being under a moonlit sky, admiring the constellations with the one you love. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks .... nopie, that'll do nicely ! *Hugs* SueTang~ Thanks, it's a glorious sky when shared for sure ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Ahh...it's always a pleasure to enjoy the night through your eyes it's so magical! Hugs, ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Ahh...it's always a pleasure to enjoy the night through your eyes it's so magical! Hugs, ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very nice! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like the perfect meeting to me.. Love this. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ It's a pleasure to share. Thank you for letting me ..... Beki~ Thank you very much. CatalinaMoon~ *smiles* Indeed ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Marge this is so lovely. Wish I was sharing the night lights with some one special. Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge how I always enjoy your art with words.Beautiful done....more than beautiful done. Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully done as usual Marge....I love these images.... "Color me indigo with brilliance Under this sky in sparkling array Meet me in the melt of twilight After the sun has ceased the day" Wow! Good work! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maeve~ Thank you so much. I would wish that for you too ! Charisma~ Your replies always bring a warm glow to my heart. Thank you for letting me know you enjoy what I love doing~ ETHome~ Thanks, sweet friend. 'Bout time you came back to share with us~ Good to see you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Marge, liked usual. GORGEOUS!! You stun me with each piece you write!! ~Jeff~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely invitation to love, thanks for this one. |
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