Open Poetry #15 |
Full Circle |
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
From the shore I watch a sailboat Drift slowly by It moves back and forth Among the gentle waves In much the same way We travel the pages Of our lives The words we write Flow from our hearts In the gentle breeze Of the cool waters That make up The lives we live Here on this earth Where we are blessed The sail serves As a navigational tool Reminding me Of the feeling I get Deep down inside That seems to always Show me the way to go When I feel lost at sea Many times I felt this way Unable to comprehend The things that seemed To always happen to me As I watched helplessly From the sandy shore Of the beach within The corners of my mind Silently I scream Trying to shout Searching for someone To hear my aching plea One who would hold me Gently soothing me While I cried bitter tears Of what has come to pass Instead I sit alone Among the rocks Head hung low As tears stream Down my face The sand below me Warm and wet With my sorrow No one is here To comfort me Soothe me Hold me close Or tell me It will be okay No one sees The tears I cry My life has come Back full circle To the beach Where I once Felt alone Then shared with you And now I sit In solitude again All writing comes |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
I like that, well written and full of feeling. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, LW. (((Hugs))) Beautifully expressed. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Shadow: Thank you, I just them as they come to me. Denise: Aw, thank you much. (((hugs))) All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I've a feeling your circle isn't quite completed yet " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a fantastic job you did of the emotions in this one, you had me right from start to finish! Kudos! ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, this is wonderful.....love the flow of this.....definately felt the tug and pull of the ocean nicely done |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Well done! |
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