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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-08-07 10:48 AM

Out of love, and into heartache,
like a eagel i will fly.
I'll kiss you on the cheek,
and then I'll say goodbye.

You don't love me anymore,
so what else am I to do?
I have to leave before I get hurt,
so I opened my wings, and flew.

Like a feather upon the wind,
I slowly drifted away.
You just stood there and watched,
because there was nothing left to say......

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

1 posted 2001-08-07 11:11 AM

Clean get away.
....because there was nothing left to say.... I like it.

Melton

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-08-07 12:39 PM

You are improving in your writing Stac, and you are wise enough to know when to fly. Fly high, fly free. As you said, I am here for you.........always. Hugs and stuff.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-08-07 12:45 PM

Out of love, and into heartache,
like a eagel i will fly.
I'll kiss you on the cheek,
and then I'll say goodbye.

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Said with an eagle's pride and yet there is tenderness in that goodbye kiss......

A powerful touching piece........

Thank you
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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2001-08-07 01:50 PM

thanks, aunt donna, i'm glad ur there 4 me, i'm here 4 u 2. thanks all 4 the replies.

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

5 posted 2001-08-07 09:57 PM

Nicely written, SG...I like it a lot...

sp

no power in creation,
no mortal complication,
will ever stop me from being with you...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2001-08-07 10:49 PM

Sweetie, I know you are, and so is everyone else. It was just an extremely hard day for me, and today......well.....we aint even going there hon. Luv ya much and hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

7 posted 2001-09-09 12:38 PM

Hi ya! That was a good poem mon! Who's it bout?? I love it chit itches! *LoL* lylas~Jess

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