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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Now I understand the rough papered sand--and too much tough-- wine in sparkles in a glass integrity--how long they last in linger at the bottom dwell and sudden burst of freedom swell-- in the comfort of a group the bubbles rise and form a troup... a ballet formed within a glass-- bursting bubbles--waterdance. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, lets give this one 69 replies! Yes! Very good, S. Sandra |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You've left me thinking that you are trying to count each and every one... enjoyed! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is the third poem I've read about booze! That's it, I'm going out for something cold! Loved it! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all for the replies, but I have requested that this poem be deleted as it is too similar to one I read here recently--my apologies to Helen...it must have stuck in my subconscious and emerged with all those tiny bubbles... (mimosa's the other night, yanno...) *hic*? |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i think your poems will always promise my head a true word. Kindly, |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and I request it NOT be deleted though similar NOT the same I’m flattered and may we all spark each other And I’ll join you in a clink of glass and a sip of mimosa |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
69 ways of looking at a poem??  glad that it's staying. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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