Open Poetry #15 |
Shadow Harp |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Shadow Harp Virginia Salter shadow-harp on patio floor silently strums melancholy into my heart, my soul yet shadow-ferns trim this sunlit surface framing the light that seeks to illumine my being, my countenance oh that I may take it in make use of its awesome tenderness its seeking to ungray the very inner core of my heart shadow-legs stretch across the expanse in slender stripes giving contrast giving dark and light urging me to stand in the light of morning © August 23. 2000 |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A soft imaginative verse. I enjoyed this very much. Sincerely, Regina |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely, V. Sandra |
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Faust New Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 7 |
I like this. I think you could find a better word or term than "ungray" though. Perhaps "colour" or "uncover"?? Just suggestions. Enjoyed. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I can just see the imagery in this one! It's beautiful Virginia! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all! Thanks for the change of word suggestion, but neither conveys quite what I want to say. |
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