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Open Poetry #15
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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2001-08-06 11:20 PM


Magnet

in your
mind
you better
find
for you
shall soon
discover
the magnet
that you are
can
pull me
close
but
can also
push me away
further

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare
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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
1 posted 2001-08-07 01:00 AM

Very powerful write! I'm glad I didn't pass this one up!  

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-08-07 01:08 AM

fantastic analogy/metaphor

so very, very true, in any relationship

Well done!!
g-hm
Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85
3 posted 2001-08-07 08:27 AM

True.
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