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I Love You Too!!
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I Love You Too!! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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As another night's darkness falls upon me I am holding you once again, deep within my dreams. I see the pale moonlight casting shadows over the beauty that is you. I hear a Lark calling in the distance as if echoing the longing I feel for you. As the hours tick slowly by I can feel you here beside me, yet I reach out touching nothing. I wake up in a cold sweat, feeling oh so lonely. I reach for the phone to send my love along the wire but I retract my hand as I notice the time. It's funny how feelings can grow so strong in such a short time. How not being able to touch your sweet face, to hear your sweet voice whisper "I love you!" How knowing that you are a hundred miles away yet it feels like millions when are gone. Suddenly I hear footsteps and I realize it was all just a dream. As you slide under the covers beside me I feel the heat of your breath on my neck. I smile as I pull you close and whisper "I love you too!" |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Jeffrey Carter, if I were 20 years younger......  " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, what a great poem, so beautiful! Enjoyed this a lot.  Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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xerxes Junior Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 34 |
Just Beautiful, your words fall from the page like tears in the rain, excellent work, the emotion aches. -XERXES |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very beautifully written, my friend. Full of love and devotion. All writing comes |
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