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Betrayal
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Betrayal |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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It hurts Betrayal it makes doubts it steals trust it destroys good it hurts so much Betrayal |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Its marr, its mark is in permanent ink and its pain remains forever. Sorry. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
so true...helen |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, yes, Betrayal, a very good write, Sandra, but are we going to let the fact of it rule the rest of our lives?...very gentle smile |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, I know how it feels. Don't give up.... Love, Elise |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes, it does, and sometimes it goes on for years.....the damage it does is horrendous! This is so full of truth.... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sandra The damage is irreversible and the pain is something you never forget. Your words have alot of meaning and you have captured it all. Keep smiling. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, the more you trust, the more it hurts. Very good. |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Yes. It does. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
betrayal no integrity does it know |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, but thank God there are good people in the world, honest, decent people who love. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
all too true my friend. . .all too true. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Tell me about it. Bottom line: forgive... but never forget. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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