Open Poetry #15 |
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In Time |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
My heart pulls me up. Up and up I go flying into space, forever free, more alive than when I was --- Hello ancient souls, Mamasetto, Grandpa Hamed, Great grandma Viola Henrietta and Great grandpa Ed. I love you, we missed you, your daughters and sons, your millions of daughters and sons, living and living and living and then dying and dying again and again, we dance through your Spirits, forever twisting and turning through Time, We die and fly up into space, forever free in nature’s embrace, We will join you ancient souls in Time. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so beautiful ![]() ![]() |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A calling verse! Being reunited with loved ones is a very merciful and tender reward for living in this time. Very well done. Sincerely, Regina |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
While I hold a rather different view of all of this, I do like the way you have expressed the "family." I enjoyed the read. e |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in time. . . yes. . . all in time. . . well done. . . I like the flow of this, it goes well with the idea of moving up. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, this read likes me very much... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, we have to be at peace and make the most of living while we can, this is soothing in a way and also sad. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
sigh...the peace and tranquility... |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOY ![]() |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed the way you put this, my friend...good write (and thoughts) jwesley |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Well written, I enjoyed it much, there will come a time... Throw your heart out in front of you |
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