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Open Poetry #15

My unspoken words

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-08-04 08:32 PM

Silencing my unspoken words
would only make matters worse
That's why I write
to let it all out
Reality?
Fantasy?
No one should ask
I'm free when I write
that's what's all about
Amusing
Confusing
Sometimes assuming too much
No clear picture
Mysterious to some
Mispelling,
wrong usage of words
I don't care
my words
to me make alot of sense.
The end

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-08-04 08:40 PM

and that's all that matters. . . your words are your own. . . and if they make sense to someone else. . . ok. . . and if not. . . ok. . .

they're for you. . .

great work walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-08-04 08:58 PM

I'm free when I write
that's what's all about
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nothing more need be said...
very cool poem walker...
write on

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-08-05 12:40 PM

Good one, walker...like how you dealt with this. And from you, even typos are charming.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-08-07 07:05 AM

A true and honest write. Simply said! Thank you!
Sincerely,
Regina

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