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Spitooie !
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Spitooie ! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Spitooie ! ~*Marge Tindal*~  You bit off more than I could chew Now what the heck ya' gonna to do ? I'm tired a'chawing them old lies That you passed off as alibi's No more jabber of your jaw It just gets stuck here in my craw Got a real bad taste of you Know just what I gotta do I'm aiming for a pinger In spittoon-talk that's a dead-ringer Figured out that I'm all through Spitooie with you ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you do that soooooo good  remind me, that with this poem, I owe you a secret  I like this one Marge |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Anybody ever tell you you're beautiful when you're angry? ROFL...just popped in for a read, and here you are, expressing disgust so perfectly that I have to hug you for it. God, I wish I could "channel" YOU....lol... "spitooie" indeed...shaking my head and laughing. Love you Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thankee, gal~ So fun to share with you. I'll remind you !  *BIG HUGS* Serenity~ Today a friend said, "He makes me so mad I could just spit !" Well ... my muse grabbed it and ran with it ! 'Channel' away !  Sending that *hug* right back at ya' ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You are priceless .. ya know that youre like a poetry magnet.. EVERYTHING inspires you!!! Classic Marge...cute and clever.  me |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh Marge we sure do love it when your muse gets going. You can always bring a smile. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Some people can make a poem out of just about anything... LOL.. even spitting.. giggling here...  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just have dead aim, 'cause I'm not wiping the walls down... [and of course I enjoyed it!] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
LOL. Great one Marge. Chew em up and spit em out. A chaw of spineless backer! LAUGH! Perfectly done. Sincerely, Regina |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Tee-Hee ! Those little muses are just so clever, eh ? Thank ya', dahlin' INot2B~ I enjoy spreading smiles~ Nice to know you wear one of my making~ Nan~ Sharing your *giggles*~ Karilea~ Practicing pingers, I am ! RWood~ Tickled to have delighted you so. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very cute, see I am wearing a smile that you made for me ~To see real beauty you must first look with your heart~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
oh Marge, you are just too much!  I needed this tonight...thank you!~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You're going to have to teach me how to do that spitooie thing...okay? You are so darn cute...and clever ta boot. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge! Your muses are working over time! I love it! Cindi |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Marge!!!!! I love it.. as always.. u never cease to amaze me my friend!! ~Jeff~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, this is cleaver and totally cool! I love this Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Gee Marge, I hope I never get in the line of fire! This is a spithoot! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
she owes a pinger practising with her redman she can hit spittoon so she spits and spits again then she must wipe off her chin where to put hanky so stained with tobacco grit not in with dainties gotta have its own hamper 'cuz its nastier than spit |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- LOL..this is great!...definitely a 'pinger' as far as poems go! LOL Remind me to stay out of spittin' range..LOL Love it, my friend...thanks for the chuckle. hugs,  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I do believe that this one fits right into the theme of one of my favorite watering holes. Now can you do that with a cheek full of chew without losing your whiskey? Very entertaining sweet thang. gv ge yuhi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Me thinks me likes ya' with a big grin ! SmittenKitten~ Glad to know it found you ! Martie~ LOL ! Thanks, gal ! I hear SEA~'s giving lessons ! Cindi~ Oh no ! Not overtime again ! Mercy ... those muses keep me stirring ! JBaker~ Thanks, friend. Glad you got a chuckle out of it. Saunni~ Thank you, sweetie~ Constance~ LOL ! Just don't stand down-wind ! InterLoper~ LOL ! Ain't nuttin' dainty 'bout a redneck gal and her spittoon practice ! Vicky~ You got me *giggling* ! MarkB~ Hey, bub ! Don't do that thar whiskey stuff~ But a jaw a'backie and a Mountain Dew gets the same results ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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