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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Time Minutes strung together Hours, Days, Months Rolling on, Rolling on Years Pass Reunited Minutes strung together Making each one count Go too fast Connie McDonald Copyright@2001 [This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 08-04-2001).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Connie, I know what you mean -- I like the contrast you've set up between the two stanzas -- one of "rolling on" ad-infinitum and the other where you can't make them last long enough... Nice job. (Check the typo on the word "Monthes" in the first stanza). -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fresh way of speaking on time |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Mark & VAS Thank You Both very much : ) Thank You |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Connie~ Though you haven't been here for a long while, I hope that someday you will return to see what we admirers still think of your beautiful poetry~ I miss you and your poetry~ Hope the holiday season finds you happy~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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