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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
 A Cinderella I could be One that is lost Between folds of mystery Your voice Comes to me Through the ashes Of my misery Oh…. My knightly prince….. Coming from a world So far to me Taking me to dance On a breath taking Symphony Your smile Glowing Your steps Swift Never really Knowing that you are dancing The night away That I am Bound with a toll To pay That my ashes Are momentarily swept away You dance with me My hand in yours And I forget for moments My misery The stars draw our way In this veranda Where we chose to stay Away From all glaring eyes Where Whispers come of the soft symphony Time…be gentle Heed your steps Let me have my night Before it slips Hold still Hold your breath Leave the counting of moments To another day But 12 it strikes Upon my heart And I have to Leave this nightly Prince And be back to my start  Cinderella =============== Cinderella, the dreamy starlight The beauty within the repugnant life The fugitive angel from melancholic fate The indispensable flood which concealed all deprivation You gain the power to heal and hurt You are the heavenly cure to my wounds Yet you are the venom for the harsh sorrows You resemble both in such a paradox your tinkling whispers trimmed the wicked loneliness The unheard Utopia of yours screeched throughout deadly silence when we first met, you're standing in your veranda You 're shining from above like sparkling star I got infatuated by the irresistible winsome You"re chanting in your unparalleled love-chapel trimbling severly the foggy solitude I was in Cinderella, you brought together my indefinable debris Cinderella you vanquished my unruly soul you reached the last depth in my pit Cinderella , I can't wait till you are in my arms neither bear being lost without you anymore PASSION'S memberes, I would like 2 thank MEM, for let me have this awesome chance...to be together in one frame , in one rainbow MEM u r amazinig , and I appraise your effort 4 making this lovely dream come true at last Everybody, I would like to present to u the one and only MEM, in the 1st poem [This message has been edited by Romeo (edited 08-04-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Romeo~ How nicely done. Enjoyed the presentation. Grandma said ... 'Fairy tales CAN come true - you just gotta fit that shoe !'  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow. Romeo and Mem, I love this, you both said a lot in these worlds.And as a princess/fairy tale obsessed person..I have to relate as well. Darn, I wish I had done this one!!  Sandra PS I am going to try to send a pic, it no doubt will be invisible, but worth a try.  Sandra |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
Marge Tindal Hi there Marge, I appreaciate your sweet words my friend I do believe in what you grany 've said thanks Marge ---------------- catalinamoon I'm really speachless about what have u said Sandra,and I'm pleased that u liked it afterall o thanks 4 the lovely pic Romeo |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
That was one beautiful...lovely experience with the magic of Cinderilla's fairytale I have quite enjoyed our collaboration on this beautiful "rainbow"......  Thank you Romeo......for this dance....  ******************************** |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is such a lovely post!! Fairy tales and happy endings - so sweet!! Guess I'll really have to go now and look for my shoe... hhehe |
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