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Dance Beyond The Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Dance Beyond The Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~  Always together ~ never apart Memories cascade in the masquerade of tears across barren plains of the heart Forever in remembrance ~ the spirit now soars beyond the blue horizon ~ to the land of evermore Soaring on the spirit of forever ~ dancing past the moon Coming to rest in a friends heart ~ in the sing-song of a tune Gentle breezes blowing, through an open window of my mind Ruffling the pages of memories you left behind Sung in soft recall ~ of all you were to me Dance beyond the moon in splendid gaiety I can bear your leaving ~ knowing you will return Always together ~ never apart To comfort a friend~ So long for now, Jenna~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Bless you Marge, bless you. This was beautiful and will be carried in my heart forever and ever, now I can't see to write what is in my heart right now, thank you. If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely said... wonderful words Marge |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Marge what a tender heart you have ~ from beginning to end it is so gently comforting. Bonnie |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Is it any wonder that I love you? |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wow!! Marge thiis is beautiful and so true of the closeness some share. The music is a nice touch. A nice soft touch. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
What Marge does...stems from her soul. Well done, my dear... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Soaring on the spirit of forever ~ dancing past the moon Coming to rest in a friends heart ~ in the sing-song of a tune Gentle breezes blowing, through an open window of my mind Ruffling the pages of memories you left behind Sung in soft recall ~ of all you were to me Dance beyond the moon in splendid gaiety" thank goodnes I haven't put makeup on yet....this made me cry like a baby.....you know which notes to hit when you sing the song of my heart dear Marge.....thank you for this keeper  "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge, my friend- Your heart is showing..  This is absolutely beautiful, and just another sign of what a wonderful and loving friend you are. love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Very nice. This poem went right past my mind and went straight to my heart speaking volumes to my spirit about true friendship. Thank you. -Bob |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, What can I say after what has been said? Love ya Sy |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sigh, I think I need to just tend my fires, for I will never even come close to how wonderfully you write and express your feelings in a flow that cascade down from the mountain of life...so very well done, guardian sister..very tender gentle smile |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, a beautiful tribute~ Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I do appreciate the comments from each of you~ This one came from deep within my heart to comfort the heart of another~ Effortless on my part ... as I had a special spirit bring it to me~ Mysteria~ I love you~ Remember, she now soars the spirit of Jannea ... she will return~ Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
God It is good to read your words again.... I know how this feels, love and HUGS Marge...  ...Greeneyes~ **** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 07-13-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ It's never easy to let them go, but some times we must. She will return in time. Wonderfully penned farewell. LW All writing comes |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
oh, Marge...  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge, I am sure she will be comforted by this one...brought tears to my eyes! Thanks Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ I am so pleased to see you back among friends. Thank you for catching this one. LoneWolf~ Return she will ... again~ Balladeer~ I love you, my friend~ Cindi~ Tears of sweet remembrance return on the dancing spirits~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
O me O my, sweetie this is sooooooooooooo beautiful the expression and the presentation is totally captivating ... HugsNsmiles2UdearPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I sit here in admiration and awe ... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CoCoBaci~ Thanks so much for coming in, sweet friend. InterLoper~ How I enjoy your thoughts and humbly appreciate them. Sometimes the heart just speaks a piece to comfort another ... that's just what this was intended to do. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Beautiful Marge...you definitely know how to treasure a friend and show them how much you care. You are an amazing comforter! Hugs, ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Thank you .. I just read my heart~ Appreciate your comments very much. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bumping to Today's Topics page, Just 'cause my heart said I should~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Someone reminded me of this today~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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