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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-08-03 04:15 PM

winter’s warm

let me tender
you
in the chill
of your
winter days

as drifting,
glistening
snow becomes
comfort under which
we snuggle,

when embers of
this, our fire,
are brought
up,
and in,

yes, I shall meet
you beneath
the mantle
of snow

holding yet
in open palm
this promise

and a smile
pledging
an oath of
a balmy
forever

I shall be
your
warm

and you
shall be
my
love

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

1 posted 2001-08-03 04:26 PM

Very, very pretty. Your words amaze me at times. Heck, they amaze me most of the time! You're an excellent writer.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

2 posted 2001-08-03 04:35 PM

I like the imagery in this. And the image too.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-03 04:35 PM

Very very nice...

And if I
lie under mantle
covered in warmth
from that which would
freeze the heart
if
in pangs of guilt
the sun did eclipse
again the moon
I see reflecting
in you?

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-08-03 05:16 PM

Lady In White-
   This is just lovely..
   Very nicely written.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2001-08-03 07:35 PM

This is very beautifully expressed, Lady!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2001-08-03 11:35 PM

Soft and warm...gracefully spoken..."I will be your warm, and you shall be my love".

Such giving and truth...this piece...

Bowing...me to you.

jwesley

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-08-03 11:44 PM

as drifting,
glistening
snow becomes
comfort under which
we snuggle...

Lady---Though winter has never been my favorite season...you make it sound inviting. Great write! Loved the last two verses, also.

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