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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Shards places icicle cold absolutely no warmth do they hold enthusiasm frozen in time suspended emotion unorganized rhyme luster lacking in broken glass no colorful familiarly in shards but mass "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this alot for the images and the flow..nice work Helen! Broken sharps lie glittered in sunlight and it starts crunching cuts of bared soul as shards left by you begin the bleed Now stained glass fragile their colors set [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 08-03-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now then. . . pick up the shards. . . and place them back. . . well done helen. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - lovely you write, as a soft rainbow across the morning sky... BC |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
glass is like sex it's beautiful when it's shining and finished and say a wine glass smooth and inviting, but harmful when it's cut and sharp and jagged around the edges....enjoyed this one, Helen" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love it! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nice write, Enjoyed!! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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