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When dreams meet reality ...Tanka ... Thank you Lady in White
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When dreams meet reality ...Tanka ... Thank you Lady in White |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Inspired by Lady in white ~*~ moistened lips ready eyelids closing as face tilts anxious heart pounding lips meld in soft awareness now dreams meet reality http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 08-03-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely soft.. Interloper.. as usual..I enjoyed |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you, Sir... dreams reality centered in the mist of missed searching continues |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Very sensual and lovely - I wish things had gone this way when my dreams and reality were introduced!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, Enjoyed. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
another superb tanka from the voice of the Southland. . . well done Sir. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
my my is this a yummy vision!!! good stuff, you! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ooh, I love this, well expressed! Melissa! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nicely done! jwesley |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Wow...love this! Thanks to you and your inspiration. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
sounds like a first kiss! You express such moments so well I love your love poems.And this is another form I must try out! Any tips? ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful Tanka. Nicely done. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Ooooooooooooooooh. Beautiful. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, this is beautiful. Sandra |
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