Open Poetry #15 |
I Am (Kitten's Challenge) |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Okay..okay. So I'm late, but its finally done, eh? I am passionate and steadfast. I wonder why the night wraps me in lonliness. I hear a soft voice on the wind. I see a kiss fluttering on my lips. I want to know how far I can take my passion. I am passionate and steadfast. I pretend that I am a princess strong as stone. I feel my destiny calling from fairy tale lands. I touch the gentle arm of my wounded lover. I worry that our times is fleeting like the ocean meeting with the sand in waves. I cry when my hear ponders loss. I am passionate and steadfast. I understand why my friendship is required. I say that love knows no ending. I dream that one day I may explore myself. I try to conceal an unreturned love. I hope my heart always shows. I am passionate and steadfast. [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 08-03-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
yes, you are passionate and steadfast, and I am always glad to see you write, as I enjoy the passionate read!!! Enjoyed very much! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
I am what I am, no more, no less, but only what I can be for you..hmm, think a dolphin said that once..a very very nice write and I see the tenderness in this one...very gentle smile, gentle maid |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes you are all these things indeed. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i dream that one day i may explore myself i hope my heart always shows temptress, you have echoed my exact sentiments....i related to those two lines strongly... glad to meet a kindred spirit within these pages...grins |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I love the "I Am" challenge.. You've done it great justice, Miss Steadfast... |
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