Open Poetry #15 |
Sharing Pillows - from a while back - revised |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sharing Pillows You know how it is, you have that special pillow the one that fits just your head, your way? Well, there’s a little story I shall tell you hopefully you’ll look at pillows in other plays. When you were young, a child in mother’s arms she watched over you, keeping you from harm. When you ran a fever and were so very ill, your mother fluffed cool pillows, keeping her vigil. Later you, a teen, slumber parties or overnights there soon would be the ultimate pillow fight. Later, married, when pillows became a thrill between bed’s sheets, carefully placed by will. Then in your life, these pillows would form a nesting spot 'tween mother, father and baby warm a place of comfort, love, and sharing hearts from which place you’d not want to part. Skipping through time, where you’re now aged leafing through life’s last and final page, pillows take on a new and different rapport as they hold the remains of your inner core. “So bless me, Lord, when I should pass along, allow my head to be on my pillow, where I belong. Take thee my soul, but leave my essence of life To be breathed in deeply by my now widowed wife.” 20 August, 1999 ©KRJ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Gosh, Karilea this is truly so touching. I too, had a favourite pillow as a child that I literally wore out into my teen years, my mom finally has to rip it from my hands, I would not let it go, I'm sentimental afterall. I love your story poems. The ending is so sad, I hope that it's not based on your life Melissa~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely told... and touching.. I enjoyed |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Wow, this was most enjoyable to read! My daughter has already started to have that 'favorite pillow' Cindi |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sunshine, i think its a great idea that you find something that can be representative of the various periods in our life and revolve your poem around it....pretty cool idea.... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunshine--When my loved one is away...I sleep with his pillow ..for it does hold some essence of him that is very comforting. This is a lovely reminder of the importance of pillows in a life..thank you. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Karilea, This is such a nice write and really does make me look at pillows differently. Thank you. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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