Haiku#2 "explosive Thresholds"

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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2001-08-02 09:06 AM

Explosive thresholds
Accumulating unheard
Feelings of desire

(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Cpat Hair

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1 posted 2001-08-02 09:09 AM

cool... interesting idea...
I enjoyed

cpalmer
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2 posted 2001-08-02 12:30 PM

Hey this is pretty cool!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

rwood
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3 posted 2001-08-02 12:49 PM

What a way to burst forth into this style. I think that's what makes it explosive. Instead of just basking in desire, if you're patient, you can drown in it for a while.
Sincerely,
Regina

athena4
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4 posted 2001-08-02 03:18 PM

Mark,
We never know what is awaiting us... Great write.
Elise

Voiceless
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5 posted 2001-08-02 03:31 PM

I am loving these short poems!
This is neat!

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SmittenKitten
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6 posted 2001-08-02 04:35 PM

Woo, there's a sizzle in this one! You definitely captured the moment

Another awesome Haiku Mark.
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-08-03 04:51 PM

Enjoyed this one Mark...I don't think I've even written a Haiku...if I did I wouldn't enen know it...hey he wrote a haiku and he didn't even know it...ha..James

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2001-08-03 09:43 PM

Thanks, Ron.

Thank you, Cindi.

Regina...  drowning in desire...  hmmm...  I'd rather just splash around in it.

Elise:  sometimes we do.

Voiceless:  Glad you're enjoying them.

Thank you, Krista -- a little sizzle can be sexy.

James, it couldn't be much easier -- just think "5", "7", "5" and you'll be reeling in them (or reeling them in...?).

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

ShannonM
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9 posted 2001-08-04 12:05 PM

Kudos! Very strong. I really enjoyed this.

ShannonM

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2001-08-04 11:37 AM

Glad you enjoyed, ShannonM -- thanks for the read & reply.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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