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The Way You Make Me Feel
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The Way You Make Me Feel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Please don't ask me why I have so much love for you And why my heart always skips a beat Whenever you come into view The smile on my face always broadens Whenever we walk hand in hand How I love standing with you by the water As our feet sink so slowly into the sand How I love your arms around me As the sun sinks way down low How radiantly our love shines Underneath the full moon's glow How I love the way you love me How much you fill my very soul I'm captivated by your being And as a woman I feel whole In my dreams you are beside me As you take my hand in yours So warmly my heart welcomes you As it opens up its doors We sit together for hours Not always with words do we speak As we scale the heights of passion And reach it's highest peak Your sensual touch ignites me Like an ember how it burns You reach so deeply inside me And so much more of you I yearn How we wile away the hours As love takes us to many a place But all too soon you are gone As a tear travels slowly down my face Suetang |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Grr...another poem of trickery. Make it sound like it's gonna be happy in the beginning, and then last lines...boom, it's sad. Hehe, good write anyway. Jeremy |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
wow. i must agree w/ whitedragon, this was nice and the ending made it sad.......o well, i loved this one, great job. ~sabriel So many books, so little time |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Sue... ending turns it a bit sad, but the way ot is presented is exceptional.. Good write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ 'Your sensual touch ignites me Like an ember how it burns You reach so deeply inside me And so much more of you I yearn' I do like those burning embers~ Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
What a great feeling, indeed, Suetang... up to that last part which transforms it all into a great memory... but at least that much, right? I empathize. Nicely done. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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