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Open Poetry #15

Refreshed And Repaired

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-08-02 04:31 AM

Refreshed And Repaired

Making sick puppy sounds
Computer began to whelp
Having run out of memory
The poor thing needs help

My machine had dementia
It gave out another groan
The computer technician
I knew I had to phone

Arriving with the bad news
Saying they age so quick
It screams for upgrades
Your computer is so sick

Spoke in computer jargon
In diagnosing the trouble
Gigabytes and memory
You now need to double

Crying out for more speed
I thought that was a drug
Shook his head laughing
He then pulled the plug

Assuring me of its return
Refreshed and repaired
A much larger hardrive
My computer was spared

Hope ©2001

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-08-02 08:37 AM

very cute Hope, enjoyed the humor...and rhyme

I have known this illness before.

~Smiles
Wynter/M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-02 08:47 AM

Cute poem... I enjoyed!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2001-08-02 08:56 AM

Hi thanks Maureen , pleased it gave a smile ,
yes on these machines we have to keep a sense of humour , would be nice if when hearts were broken they could be repaired as quickly.
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Hey thanks Cpat for responding , pleased you enjoyed the fun rhyme
Hope

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