Open Poetry #15 |
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Lullaby |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia ![]() |
Goodnight, goodnight, sweet one, it’s time to go to bed. How may kisses does it take while you can still hold up your head? I’ll sing you one more lullaby with words and tune unclear, leaning as close as I can to whisper it in your ear. With your eyes half closed and your smile that says so much, I know you’re in a far off land full of dreams and such. Sweet dreams, my sweet one I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ How adorably sweet~ I love lullabies ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely... just the thing for a lullaby.. I enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You sing a sweet song here Dee.. what a lovely gem this is...great rhyme flow, this was a treat to read aloud... so good to see you posting again too ![]() take care jm slow burn ... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How precious! ![]() Melissa~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Just the thing for a grandbaby on the way? Thank you all. JM, it's good to be back writing too. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
A sweet song for a sweet child I am sure. Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear the melody Dee. . . softly wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Dee This was so beautifully written, I loved every word. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is so sweet, it sure will sing me to sleep... Loved every word. ![]() Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Maeve, Sven and Sue, thank you, glad you liked it ![]() Parker, close your eyes and I'll try and sing it for you. ![]() Ok guys! honest opinion time please...should the second and third stanza be reversed? I'm not sure if they would sound better that way. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I think it works both ways... as long as your whispering it in my ear... ![]() Parker |
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