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Flutterwings
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 288
Maine

0 posted 2001-08-01 11:38 PM

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Is your love as true as the songs that you sing?
Is your heart as warm, as the joy that you bring?
Take my hand my love, would you be my eyes
and let me feel your tears when you cry?

May I caress your face, with anxious finger tips
and with my hungry mouth, may I taste your lips?
Guide my hands, my love, show me who you are;
hold me close and tell me, how bright are the stars?

My eyes cannot see you, but like a magical sound
you enter my being and I feel you all around.
Guide my fingers and let me see your eyes;
are they the glistening color of the deep blue sky?

Let me feel your strength, take me in your arms
hold me like you'll always, protect me from all harm.
Make me feel secure, show me, that you care;
Love me and promise me, you will always be there.

You are my eyes, you are my bright and shining star;
I don't need to see, to know how handsome you are.
I can feel your presence as you penetrate my soul,
your song is my vision, my strength, I am whole.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-08-01 11:51 PM

Well I do declare Mz. Flutterwings that was a very sensual poem, expertly done, and it deserves a definite whooo hooo~ I loved it Maggie.

~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~
~* Mysteria *~

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-08-01 11:54 PM

May I caress your face, with anxious finger tips
and with my hungry mouth, may I taste your lips?
Guide my hands, my love, show me who you are;
hold me close and tell me, how bright are the stars?

I love the trust and hopefullness you've written here!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-08-02 09:47 PM

wonderfully done. . . I loved the flow and the passion behind this poem. . .

when it's real. . . you know it. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-08-02 10:56 PM

FlutterWings~
Deep sighs here~

Such loving thoughts, so lovingly portrayed.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2001-08-02 11:08 PM

I believe it was just downright pretty Flutterwings...really liked it a bunch...

jwesley

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-08-02 11:08 PM

This is truly beautiful

Melissa~

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