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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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G rrrr eaoe eswa nsst S wooa alfn yotd B laae uysn eskd H eeoe aaml rrel tsso ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 07-12-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Sven---Are you feeling alright? LOL Ok, I'll keep 'reading' until I figure it out. Ok, I'm back...very cool! [This message has been edited by JLR (edited 07-12-2001).] |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like it. Of course, you might consider the source. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
well, I found all the words, but i don't get it...sorry |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
What an interesting poem!  |
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5_sweet_kisses Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49 |
this poem is a lil bit different i got it after a few times reading it but nice poem  [This message has been edited by 5_sweet_kisses (edited 07-13-2001).] |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I confused! but I like it! I'll have to read this one till I have a headache or I scream whichever comes first! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Hmmmm..Ya see..Above is what i'm feeling right now. Kinda silly from the hour it is right now.  Perhaps I'll come back, Sven Pen? Are you resting okay? Do you need your temperature taken? Is this your own secret language? LOL! Very intersting for sure!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
P a o e s e o s t p i r l o y e n s |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
KEWL... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(laughing) I haven't had enough coffe for this type of creativity...I get it... just absolutly cross eyes until I have another cup..and can absorb what it takes to do this.. man..you gotta lay of the mushrooms... Very Clever Sven.. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Me think's I'm falling and I can't get it! I saw this last night and thought a good nights sleep would help but NO I'm still as blonde as ever  Let me guess it's some thing really simple to figure out RIGHT???  Love's ya, Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 07-13-2001).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Intriguing piece Sven, I don't know what you were trying but, it's nice experiment.....now get here and tell us what's going on pal! Nathan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
 Glad that I could make all of you think. . . here's a hint. . . start with the first letter and read down. . . The first verse, then, would be: green grass grows great Have fun!!!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
You are a cutie pie Sven, I never would of got it you know enjoyed it,,Love, Cerenity |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven, this is so creative!! LOVE it! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ti evol i..kniht..i  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, Sven, I got that, and read all the words, found all the words, but the 1st one is the only one I can make sense out of, I still need help. Even if it's getting some sense. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like it...cleveryly done, Sven. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Clever Sven. I would respond in a like wise fashion but my brain refuses to be smart for the moment. "Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
STOP THAT! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
  I GOT IT! errr.. sort of...umm...I have a couple of questions though, but I'll save them til I can ask you! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Uh, are you trying to make me even crazier?? Interesting, but I am still confused as well. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hummmm, what a wonderful way to say it....nicely done Sven~ Greeneyes~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LOL thanks to everyone that's replied. . . this is kind of a stream-of-consciousness thing. . . I picked the words that I used because they seemed to make sense together. . . it's not really meant to be "read" so to speak, as much as it's meant to be "seen". . . so, is it supposed to make sense?? only if you want it to. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
concrete poetry, sven? you never get tired of trying new things, do you?? i dig your concept!! refreshing!! |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Very, very clever! It threw me for a loop the first time through, but I got it on the second 'seeing'. I'm not sure this counts a poetry (I am a [pretty] strict constructionist you know) but what the hell?! I enjoyed it! Sing while you may |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
Yanni mishmaoola kedda! Ya gamoosa! Ya haiyawana! -Samia |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I give you an A+ for imagination. Deb |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Okie Dokie, Sven, should I unscramble the words? I know it is good, because you wrote it, but I can't get it. I will figure it out. Let me know if I should unscramble it Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
faterider, no, you know me, I've always got to try to expand. . . glad that you like my friend. . . Ian, thank you Sir, this is just me having fun with the forms. . . thanks for reading . . . Samia, um. . .yahiewa! Theiapods, deiavee. . . weloceoamm!! Deb, thanks. . . they tell me that it gets away from me sometimes!! LOLSaunni, read back a little in the thread, you'll find out how to read this one. . .but, play with it first. . .see if you can figure it out. . . thank you. . .------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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