. . . A lady's dream . . . Thank you Catalinamoon

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-08-01 10:12 PM

Inspired by Catalinamoon
~*~

dreams of your white knight
no man can live up to them
fantasy makes dreams
true love is reality
like a touch or kiss
that burns like fire in being
creating yearning in you

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SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-08-01 10:30 PM

but, sometimes, dreams come true....you wish so hard and want so much....you make him real........

I know......

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-08-01 10:44 PM

Ahh, thanks for doing this. And you know what, plenty of men can live up to my ideals. I just don't happen to ever meet them.

But I will. This is perfect.
Sandra

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-08-01 11:19 PM

"no man can live up to them"

no man?.....is she dreaming of the impossible?

I hope it's not true....
and her dreams could come true....

I loved it nevertheless......a really nice piece.....

Thank you
*******************

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-08-02 01:19 AM

Ahh, he may be a bit battered, for the knight business is a rough one..gentle smile..but dreams? ahh dreams, who is to say or not?

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-08-02 02:21 AM

ah yes, we must keep dreaming and hoping and planning

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-08-02 08:36 AM

in the white knight's light
come forth on dreams this long night
tender, welcome sight

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

7 posted 2001-08-02 07:26 PM

A wonderful piece! But I still have to agree and believe that the Prince can someday ride up, and "take you away from all this". Idealistic, perhaps, but like Sandra, I still hold dear the fairytale...
Elise

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2001-08-02 07:34 PM

A very wonderful gift of poetry to one that truely deserves to find "her" white knight. It DOES exist and I enjoy knowing that she has a dream that she KNOWS will one day come true. Very nice write indeed.

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

9 posted 2001-08-02 07:39 PM

Keep dreaming!!!

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2001-08-02 07:55 PM

"You gotta have a dream
if you don't have a dream
how you gonna make a dream come true?"

Dreams do need a little of the human mixed in with them...because there is no such thing as perfect. Right?

Enjoyed your poem!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-08-02 09:32 PM

ah, but my fellow voice of the Southland, dreams do come true. . . for all of us. . .

well inspired and well done. . .

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