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Waiting |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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The longest days of my life are spent, just loving you... And waiting for the time when all my wildest dreams come true... And when that moment comes, when I can stand there by your side... The words are said, I give my vow, to ever be your bride... And know that what my heart has taught, must never be denied... Then that’s the day my future will begin... I’ll be right here, just waiting, until then... These longest days of my life are passing slowly by... They just drag on and on, no matter how many tears I cry... The thought that keeps me going, is of how our lives will be... The day you join me to your world, and give your love to me... To be within your loving arms, will set my spirit free... I’ll wait for our “forever” to begin... And dream of our tomorrows, until then... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nicely done, Sunny, and I am waiting too. I see a happy future for you though. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone, I'm sure he'll come along. Enjoyed the read. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is sadly beautiful, I wish the best for you~ Melissa~ |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Keep your chin up and that beautiful smile on your face - the day will soon be here and you will find happiness. It is in your heart and in your words. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah ..the waiting.. hang in there! I am sure the day will come, and when it does..it will be all the sweeter for the waiting... I enjoyed! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice, Sunnyone ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely words! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
There's nothing at all wrong with this hope, these feelings, nothing at all, they are honest, good, true feelings of love and it's what we all need! Thank you, Sunny. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
That is what dreams are for and believe it or not........they DO come true eventually especially when they are ones of pure honest intent. Nice format and exceptional flow and cadence in this piece. Nice to see you still here. |
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