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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-08-01 03:51 PM

Touch me now with hands of gold
do not leave out anything
touch me, I've been too long cold
holding so much love to bring.

Touch me now, don't turn away
for who knows when next we meet
how long until yesterday
tastes only of bittersweet?

Touch me now, you know you want
to know, to feel love within
release all memories haunts
to find you, in me, again.

Touch love with me, touch the stars
love can never go too far...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-08-01 03:53 PM

no hands of gold mine
only tender strokes have I
as warm as my heart

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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-01 03:57 PM

too far gone in love
hands can not touch quite enough
still they long to try

Very nice poem... I enjoyed!

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-08-01 04:40 PM

Ahhh, very nice, Sandra..all emotions, shown and unshown, very good..very gentle smile

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-08-01 05:18 PM

enjoy:]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-08-01 06:57 PM

"love can never go too far. . . "

well said Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

6 posted 2001-08-01 08:43 PM

I'm with Sven on this one..that line says it all in my book! Great write, lil sis!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

7 posted 2001-08-02 12:59 PM

Passionately persuasive... I especially liked this passage:

for who knows when next we meet
how long until yesterday
tastes only of bittersweet?

Definitely relateable.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-08-02 02:23 AM

very, very nice, Catalina...sweet, sensual, tender

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-08-02 05:44 AM

"Love can never go too far." I'll keep that in mind...James

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

10 posted 2001-08-02 07:18 AM

I'm with James - Love can never go too far.
Nicely done - enjoyed.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

11 posted 2001-08-02 07:18 AM

Sweet and passionate! Love can never go too far....very nice! Thank you.
Sincerely,
Regina

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

12 posted 2001-08-02 03:28 PM

Sandra,
Such desires you have invoked here. It "touched" me!
Love, Elise

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