Open Poetry #15 |
After Experiencing Interruption Of U (15 or less series 3) |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Anticipated Entrapment Incorporated Openness Until Afterthoughts Enticed Introspection Overtly Undermining Appropriate Excursions Into Orchestrated Unsavoriness [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This series is intriging...your abilty, amazing! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
JLR.. thanks for the very nice words... just playing with a form and sounds... this one was to follow the vowels a e i o and u one word per line using each in succession while still making some sort of sense to the reader. Not sure how much sense it makes... but hey... it was intriguing to try.. Again... Thanks for the comment and the nice words...they are appreciated |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
and eventually intensifies overt understanding |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes....in the form and the spirit of the orginal.. nicely done!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"orchestrated unsavoriness?" Oh, Ron, you rascal ... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
intriguing, may try it |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
to expand my muse to this level of vocabulary would take a life time, but dang if she and I don't enjoy it immensly when you do it |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
An Expressive, Interesting Offering, Undoubtedly... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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