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A Thousand Kisses
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A Thousand Kisses |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
A thousand kisses I have kept for you, held them with pleasure except for just two. The first one is chaste, in public, you see. Not the way I want our first kiss to be. The last is a kiss, oh so bitter sweet. A kiss of goodbye till again we meet. But those in between, those kisses we’ll share, kisses of passion, are ones I can spare. Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Very nice poem. Deb |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Thank you both for the lovely welcome. I think I am going to like it here. Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
welcome nicely said..I enjoyed the read.. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Such a sweet nice piece.....  Welcome to Passions You will love it here  ************************** |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
welcome and settle back and enjoy yourself, just write whatever you feel and let it flow... " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Welcome!!! Such a nice piece, such a nice idea. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Welcome to Passions! What a sweet entrance you have made~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Maeve ~ Welcome to Passions, and that was such a lovely entrance piece. I am really looking forward to reading more of yours. Very nice piece.  ~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~ ~* Mysteria *~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Maeve-hi and welcome! I'm new too, and I can tell you these are some very nice folks. I liked your poem too. but hey, it's about kissin', what's not to like! good work. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, I hope your planning on sharing some of those thousand kisses. As a proper new member should...lol Didn't anybody tell you about the initiation rites... Parker |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*and Melissa hoses Parker down*  I'm starting to notice a pattern from you, Parker hehehe [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Thank you all for your welcome. I am enjoying my time here so far. You all are such amazing poets, I have a lot to live up to. Melissa, is there maybe something you should tell me about Parker? Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Maeve This was such a wonderful piece of writing you chose as your first post, I enjoyed it immensely and look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Passions! Very nice piece. All writing comes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
except for just two. The first one is chaste, in public, you see. Not the way I want our first kiss to be. The last is a kiss, oh so bitter sweet. A kiss of goodbye till again we meet. But those in between, those kisses we’ll share, =================== This is a very clever and creative write... I like the thought and intend behind this. well done!! Welcome to Poetry Land... nice to meet you. slow burn ... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very creative write...welcome to Passions! Great poem! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi maeve, want to say welcome too. Liked your kissingpoem very much, liked the form it was written in too. You will feel at home here I'm sure, cause we're just a bunch of nice poets  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Thank you all you have made me feel very welcome here. Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
And a thousand kisses would never be enough with the one you love What an awesome first post! Can't wait to read more Welcome!~Krista  P.S. Maeve is the name of one of my favourite authors...it's such a lovely name "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Thank you Krista. You have all made me feel so welcome. And you're right.....a thousand would never be enough. Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Maeve, this is a sweet lovely poem. As for Parker, I hear he is a shameless flirt! Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
WELCOME MAEVE! Wonderful first post. Look forward to more. Sincerely, Regina |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hey, shameless doesn't mean insincere. I'm a sincere flirt, because its hard not to have a smile on your face with all the sweet poets here. So I flirt therefore I Am..... Parker |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
maeve This is wonderful! Welcome to passions! You will like it here! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to passions, maeve  i look forward to reading more of your work and to receiving some of those kisses from you....  i'm just collecting stories in life....colleen from survivor 1 |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome indeed - This had to be good, considering the wonderful attention it's gotten - and well deserved, I might add...  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your wonderful work in the future |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Thank you every one, so much. You have made me feel so welcome here. Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Salutations. Grab a keyboard and type at the screen for a while -- we're eager for more. I like the unique angle of the two special kisses -- refreshingly different. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Hi Mark, I apreciate your comments, thanks for that. I think I just might have to type some more. Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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