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Aching Heart
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Aching Heart |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
My heart aches and bleeds Filled with overwhelming need No one is here to see What’s become of me The agony of its beat Makes my mind retreat Buried inside my chest Forever laid to rest Never to be filled with emotion Or love’s tender devotion All that’s left is black And a list of things I lack For who would want my heart After it’s fallen completely apart It was thrown carelessly aside As it lost all sense of pride So here I sit alone My heart as hard as stone No one is here to see What’s become of me All writing comes |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I have found your heart please take it and care for it your heart is lovely please love yourself evermore then others will love you too |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, I feel the pain in this, perhaps because this echoes my emotions as well. A powerful write. Your heart's not broken, just bruised, and I hope that in time, it will heal, you just need a bandaid of love   Take care, Melissa~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, a sad rendition of lost love. I hope you feel better soon, if this is about you. Take care. Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Interloper: Aw, you are very sweet. Thank you much for your kind words. Melissa: I'm sorry you relate to this. We all get bruised from time to time, but it always heals. Thanks for the bandaid! Sandra: Just some feelings inside finally coming out. Writing is soothes the soul by freeing it I think. Sometimes though you have to see where you have been in order to see where you need to be. Thank you! All writing comes |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Oh sweetie, I wish I could give you a great big hug after reading this {{{{{{{{{HUGZ}}}}}}}}}} <---- That will have to do I guess  I sure hope we meet up one of these days soon, I miss talking to you   Take care till thenStrive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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polarflame New Member
since 2001-07-30
Posts 9Az, USA |
Dear Lonewolf, Alas, it ends like this. And it truly sear my heart to realize your dilemma. I just want you to know, let not this experince make the worse of you. Instead, take it as a challenge that you'll be a better lover next time. Revenge is sweet and I know you know what I mean... -------------------------- the heart is an organ of fire... >>PolarFlame |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very well expressed...James |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Lone Wolf, hearts do mend eventually. I loved this beautiful, sad poem. Maeve Take me back to Erin's shores, |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Broken hearts mend, you just have to give it some time. **HUGS**  Deb |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it saddened me to read this but guess what? I'm here to cheer you up and tell you your heart is an open, sincere heart and writing DOES help.  " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Thanks for sharing this, Lone Wolf. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
sorry to hear this is what's in your heart, but this is an excellent expression of it...great write... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, LW, Now weren't you always told to believe your elders?, So take it from an elder..very gentle smile..if it hurts, it isn't broken..and put the balm of the light of love back on it, and it will heal..trust me, for the fires do cauterize open wounds and heal |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This has a sad message, but I think we often need to see ourselves clearly before anyone else will. DUH!  I meant say I loved it. I did yanno! [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 08-02-2001).] |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Im so glad I did not miss this one! If you heart aches give it a hug for me! Cindi |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Oh.....This really touched me....such a powerful expressive write sounding your heart's pain....... But hopefully writing about it help in easing that pain....... Thank you *************************** |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Good Job!!!! Thank You |
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