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Stop, Drop and Roll
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Stop, Drop and Roll |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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I really can't believe I wrote this lol Stop, Drop And Roll Let me show you I can love you until the break of dawn A night to remember your whole life through Allow me to take you places you've never been Let me show just what my love can do... We can lie beneath the stars in the middle of pouring rain With nothing but the waters between us and the night I can make you fly higher than anyone can And, may you find here an even brighter light... So, let me find sincere moments from me to you Let us love with nothing but heart and soul Feel the fire, desire on high And, when the heat's too hot, stop, drop and roll... There's nothing like freedom when you're willing to fly And, nothing like losing a bit of self control For every fire sparks in the arms of the ready ones And, when you feel it burning, stop, drop and roll... If you can take me on just reach for my hand Find it within yourself to take control Feel the lovers breeze, but no stopping please If it's too hot to handle, stop, drop and roll... You'll be stopping, rolling and dropping A little rhythm, Baby, hip hopin' On this soft warm ground just losing control I want to see you, Baby, stop, drop and roll... Sauni Sauni @~~~>~~ The Sun Shines Not On Us, But In Us The River Flows Not Past, But Through Us [This message has been edited by Saunni (edited 07-31-2001).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I am repying to myself. Sauni, what on earth made you write this? LOL Hmmmm, all I can say is WooHoo LOL. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Saunni, I really don't know what made you write this either. . .but, I just hope that it makes you write something like this again!!  LOLWonderfully passionate my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sven,I'm really laughing because I look at it and think...Who did this? LOL. Way out from my normal stuff...but was fun.  Thanks for stopping by!Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I have to tell you I thought it was simply grande! Stop, drop and roll indeed, that I would like to see, very, very clever Sauni. ~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ When the muses bring you FUN ... Go with the flow~ Delightful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, I for one love it! It made me feel good! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful Saunni, I loved this. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
I thought it was great, Saunni.....put a smile on my face. Maeve |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I loved it. Please write more |
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