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Open Poetry #15

My Sweetheart Departs

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-07-31 12:22 PM

My Sweetheart Departs
As the sun awakens me I suddenly feel all alone.
I reach for my sweetheart and find she has gone.
Jameslee@July31,2001

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-31 12:26 PM

very sad James.....
hugs

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-07-31 02:09 PM

Reach no more for love
love will find you in it's time
unexpectedly

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-08-01 06:43 AM

Thank you Sea and Interloper for the nice response...James

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

4 posted 2001-08-01 01:11 PM

James,

Very nice write. I can feel your pain.

Dawn

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-08-02 12:52 PM

Transformed from the tactile to the ethereal, with only a memory bridging the two... I empathize, James.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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