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The Door is Open
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The Door is Open |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Door is Open What power flows this flowers bite? That changes day back into night. What thoughts parade within my mind? Back in the depths I cannot find? What image floats my night and day? What sense can bring it here to stay? What must I do to make it true? To take the veil away from you You hover o’er my wake and sleep But always stay within the deep. How can I bring the sun to shine? How can I hold your heart to mine? I give to you this flower held Just hold it once and we will meld It holds a power over me I would it hold it over thee. The door is open to this goal Please enter in and make me whole. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Seymour |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I like this piece, especially the feel of it. I don't quite understand this line: ......"I would it hold it over thee." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy, this is a 1derful write my friend. Finally fixed :) |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I know how to get the sun to shine for it resides in your thine in your sense of what be true and yes, our Sy, it shines on you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What image floats my night and day? What sense can bring it here to stay? What must I do to make it true? To take the veil away from you You hover o’er my wake and sleep But always stay within the deep. How can I bring the sun to shine? How can I hold your heart to mine? I give to you this flower held Just hold it once and we will meld It holds a power over me I would it hold it over thee. The door is open to this goal Please enter in and make me whole. ======================= OH MY!!! OH SY ... OH *SIGH*  OH do I love this poem  (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)  ~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~ What flowers does thy mind's garden grow? What blossoms bloom beneath thou's sun aglow? Might there be thy rose of suppose bursting in satin petaled show? Do Daffodils and Daisies dance in tenderly tended rows? The path to Eden lies in thy verdant mind The stairway to Heaven in ascending wind The gate to Shangri-La, island paradise of kind This secret garden ... thy quest of find. 'Tis there that butterflies are free 'Tis there birds sing in symphonic harmony 'Tis there time touches infinity 'Tis there fate meets sweet destiny Which door to look behind? ... the key to enter 'tis not hard to find 'tis there in thy wisdom's rhyme ... and in thy gifted poets mind flower power? ... OH YEAH... *L* *winkiewinkie*  me |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sir Sy, yet again, you pen another beauty~  Melissa~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
this is nice ST...encompasses so many emotions and feelings.....nicely done sir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I give to you this flower held Just hold it once and we will meld It holds a power over me I would it hold it over thee. very sweet words, SY enjoyed~ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
A wonderful invitation - I hope she doesn't resist and soon feels that same hold. This is very well written. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
How could she resist this lovely offering? Betty Lou Hebert |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Capt Hair, Thank you. VAS, The line means I would that, that power hold both of us. Interloper, Thank you my friend. Lady, Sweet Lady. *L* JM, Sweet Tinkerbell I grow suspicious of Shangri-la and am beginning to feel it's not to far. Your answers are the accent of my day. Love ya Sy Melissa, Thank you sweet Melissa. Jellybeans, Thank you for the nicely. Nakd, Thank you for the beautiful comment. Illusion, I hope so too, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Trillium, I don't know, LOL. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How can I bring the sun to shine? How can I hold your heart to mine? I give to you this flower held Just hold it once and we will meld ======================== ROSES RULE ....  But Carnations are COOL  Just goes to prove...one doesnt always need a net to catch butterflies.  *winkiewinkie* forgot to put this bouquet in me library meslow burn ... light a candle for our love So that we will always be one on one in lovely love [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-31-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~  Beauty of the flower power Shared through visions from yon' bower Poetic lines so gracefully writ That is but the half of it Light of written words of Sy-*sigh* Within your inkwell filled to sky Spilling love of truest form Poetic phrases gently borne *You have the power yet to stir Flowering verse in softest purr~ Thank you sweet poet~ I love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM And Marge, I think I'll become a mormon I love so many of You. Hugs and kisses Sy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nicely done. May the door always be open. All writing comes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana and Love Wolf, Thank you both for the read and comment. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sometimes it takes two hands to hold one flower in place.. Nice pen, dear Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, you are one of the nicest flowers in my garden. *L* |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Very nice, Sy -- says more with each re-read... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is absolutely exquisite Powerful and yet tender, very romantic I like what you write Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, And like what you write. Love Sy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*.....I had read it over and over, what a fabulous jewel have you penned here.....excellent as always Sy.. Charisma |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
Sy...such vivid emotions you have unfurled. As you and the flower hold the girl... Such meaningful phrases you have penned, But then, that's expected again and again... Loved this piece....as all the others |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy: I have often seen the power of a flower, but I think in truth if truth be told, the giver is where lies the gold. PS: We deliver! |
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