Open Poetry #15 |
. . . Eternal promise . . . |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
we shall not forget our eyes met conveying love forever promised ~*~ remembering us verbal and silent promise one to the other ~*~ love and faithfulness when together or apart we are one in love |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
love is circumspect but in the right hands, giving love is for living |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice.. both of you.... enjoy your takes on love Interloper... and Lady... you always seem ready to reply in kind.. or is that kindness... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
love in this form's, faint recollection's perplexing foggy in time's past |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ok this is beautiful, and what it is supposed to be...as I put flowers on the grave of what mine turned out to be...but it seems I was partner to the killing, so do I deserve to mourn...sigh...sorry for the downer comments on such a beautiful poem......sigh |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"we are one in love" though two in life but with a love that lasts eternally we'd survive all strife Lovely...... I really enjoyed it Thank you ******************** |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
we solemnly vow our love one to another until time stands still All writing comes |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady ~ can love be wary cautious, prudent, or discreet it can be stealthy Ron ~ Thank you my friend. VAS ~ love in any form by my own recollection clear as fine crystal jellybeans ~ you say love is dead remember when it had life remember the birth MEM ~ one plus one is one love's mathematics diverge two in love are one LW ~ love's proclamation solemn words spoken in love both to each other http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-30-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful sentiments expressed in these Senyrus. I applaud your evident understanding of these little beauties. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Love is such a beautifuly thing! thanks for sharing this Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautiful and magical |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
forever, my love has be found within your eyes holding me spellbound |
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