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The Nothingness |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
people kept saying, "tell him how you feel, tell him." so i did, and after i told him, i felt no change..... but what had i expected, even a little change.... but no, i got nothing from him, no, i did get sumthing... i got a solid brick wall, that i just couldn't get through..... i had finally told him my true feelings, and it didn't even phase him... all i got was the deadness... the nothingness when he can't be spoken to.. death is certain, life is not |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
intense image in the last stanza..with a good presentation in the ones before... sad story... and one that hurts to feel... but you told it well.. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thank u. this came 2 me in my sleep last night....he it turned out 2 be a nightmare...  death is certain, life is not |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
wow, who was this one about? lol We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Just remember this kiddo, it's better off to find out now than waste time on what is not meant to be. Hugs, and you always know where I am at.  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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