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To Dream-To Live |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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What dreams will come at moonlight rise? What shall you see through midnight eyes? A scintillating ghost of love? Perhaps a flight of purple doves. A glowing fire to warm your heart? Shooting stars may play a part. An ocean soft envelops you to lie within perfect milieu. Such dreams will change your view of life let them remove all thoughts of strife for when your eyes are closed, they see the truth of what will someday be. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-12-2001).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Magical. And deep on very subtle, "inside" levels... I like this one a lot, Sandra. Check your spelling on the first word, though -- did you mean "What"? And the picture... ;-> -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." "Everyone can hear; few can listen." [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 07-12-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes magical, ethereal bright and promising as it's filled with hope and positive thinking |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Oh ... very, very nice. 'Perhaps a flight of purple doves.' What vivid imagery here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Agreew ith Mark on this one for sure.. very nice work!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mmmmmmmmmmmm........yes......this is great!! Loved it, but at the rate that I am keeping your poems, they are going to have to build me a new library!!!! (Smiles and Hugs!!) and lookin' good, 'lil sis, lookin' good!!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, So incredibily beautiful, both the poem, and the picture! You are a Princess of poetry and dreams... Love, Elise |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sandra, very gentle smile, how very very good, loved this and don't know how I missed it the first go round, but it deserves another nudge anyway, so am glad that I did miss it. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks everyone. I am determined to bring some magic into my life, one way or another.  Sandra |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful flow, enjoyed the read muchly. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'A glowing fire to warm your heart? Shooting stars may play a part. An ocean soft envelops you' Beautiful write, Sandra...great style for you! I enjoyed this... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Such dreams will change your view of life let them remove all thoughts of strife for when your eyes are closed, they see the truth of what will someday be. ===================== Such truth and a wonderful way to say it.... I enjoyed it alot..... Thank you ************************* |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Sorry.....repeated by mistake .... [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 07-17-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
beautiful lady...just beautiful |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful Sandra..and the picture just adds that muchmore. Nice to see you smiling *s Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
catalinamoon- very lovely.. the imagery is wonderful. i like this very much.  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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