Open Poetry #15 |
Mid Summer Fairies Dance |
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
~*~ As the water slides down the mountain peaks and liquid shadow’s cover the land, the silent sky gives up it’s light, as God’s music is poured from his hand Nature plays her melody upon solemn rocks and gazing trees, in shadows rest hidden secrets slowly rise as dancing silhouettes appear wrapped in their golden magic dance embraced in the miracle of a mountain night ~*~ BloomingRose |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
big smiles here love that picture, and your poem is beautiful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BloomingRose, You have painted a Renoir of words. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice imagery and image to go with your poem.. I enjoyed |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
SEA~ Thank you sweet friend Seymour~ Thank you so much, what a nice comment. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- I'm so glad I caught this one before it slipped on by me. Absolutely lovely, my friend...got me smiling. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow.....just wow.... death is certain, life is not |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Enchanting song, Deb. Beautifully played. All writing comes |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Cpat~ Thank you. Vicky~ Thank you, I am glad this made you smile. Spine~ Thank you much. Lone Wolf~ Good to know you liked this too. Thank you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Deb, this is quietly delicate. . . a wonderful poem. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Deb This is quite beautiful...Im glad I stopped to read it! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Deb~ What a lovely portrait of images you paint for us, that graphic enhances your enchanting words wonderfully. You know, Ellie LeJeune writes some fantastic fairy poetry, I know that she will enjoy your poem I'll email her the link~ Melissa~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sven~ Glad you find this a peaceful read. Cindi~ Thank you so much for stopping by... Melissa~ So glad you enjoyed. I hope ellie likes this too. That's what it's all about, writing and sharing. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Rose; This is so enchantingly lovely! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely, Rose.. Sandra |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
ellie and Sandra, I thank you much for your sweet reply. Deb |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I Loved the imagery in this. Wonderful write. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Poe~ Thank you so much. It's that magical time of year for lightning bugs, and lively imaginings. Glad you enjoyed. [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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