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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-07-30 09:27 AM


Friend

If I have made one cherished friend
When days are short near journey’s end
I will consider this my prize
The day I close my weary eyes

If I can count on promised deed
And call a friend in time of need
And praise his joy and his success
In heartfelt equal happiness

If he has spoken well of me
With honor and with dignity
The graciousness will be returned
In friendship that we both have earned

Then this one friend is truly worth
More than the gold in veins of earth
For friendship can enlighten days
Enhancing life in many ways

One friend’s worth more than all the souls
Who shake your hand with hidden goals
And hold deceit behind a smile
While flashing words that would beguile

A man who has a thousand friends
Not one on whom he can depend
In times of loss or fallen lot
A single friendship - he has not

Just one good friend is all it takes
To sooth the shame of your mistakes
To share your sorrow and your pain
To shelter you from wind and rain

A soul on whom you can depend
To hear your words and comprehend
Forgive your faults when you offend
To be with you at journey's end

And in embrace make new amends
I leave it up to you, my friend

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 07-30-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-07-30 09:32 AM


this is perfect ya know   I love this   have to save it  
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-07-30 09:34 AM


Elizabeth,
A new epopee. With friend and pen you have your Zen. Sy

2dalimit
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3 posted 2001-07-30 09:40 AM


A great piece of poetry. Thanks.

Melton

ShannonM
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4 posted 2001-07-30 09:45 AM


Bravo!  A reminder of the truth of real friendship.

ShannonM

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5 posted 2001-07-30 10:33 AM


A dear departed friend of mine told me that a lucky man can hope to have THREE true friends in his lifetime... 1) his mother... 2) his father 3) and ONE other - if he's really, really lucky... ... Nicely said, m'friend...
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6 posted 2001-07-30 12:17 PM


And you, dear Liz, should know...

This is wonderfully written as only you can.
and thank you!  

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7 posted 2001-07-30 12:20 PM



What a beautiful way to count the friends among us....

This is wonderfully wrought, Lady Santos...

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8 posted 2001-07-30 12:31 PM


Elizabeth,my friend~
Again you touch us with such words from the heart,
seasoned with great wisdom.
Bless your heart~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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9 posted 2001-07-30 10:01 PM


A man who has a thousand friends
Not one on whom he can depend
In times of loss or fallen lot
A single friendship - he has not

You said it Elizabeth, and well!  Loved this.

Reel beauty is only fin deep!

Denise
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10 posted 2001-07-31 12:30 PM


Those are the only kind of friends to have, friends just like you, Elizabeth!   (no guile behind this smile!)
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11 posted 2001-08-29 12:56 PM



Elizabeth-
   What wonderful thoughts you've penned here.
   A true friend is a blessing.

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



ramrog
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12 posted 2001-08-29 02:01 AM


Great read and lesson.
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