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More of the Vineyard |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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The aged vintner paced the arbor noting just the areas in need with some extra pruning, tender care years of experience he can read symptoms of malaise before too late prevent the rot from over growing weed out the bad, enable the good to flourish, keep the rich wine flowing. Such gentle care of vines of the heart can cure what seemed a hopeless disease touched with love, almost all may be healed the vinemaker, with true vision, sees. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-29-2001).] |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Short and sweet! this is a neat poem and i enjoyed it very much Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I wanna be a vinemaker now! Liked this one very much! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The last four lines of your poem especially ring out. A tall silver goblet of grape juice would be good right about now... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is timeless! Jon |
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