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Open Poetry #15

I dream of your return

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-29 07:37 AM

Dreams come silently
as I struggle not to fall asleep
Tired of this long day
exhausted from this long night
Waiting for your return
watching as hours just pass
Wandering who you are with
The sience of the night
convinces me
seduces me
lures me
slowly
eye lids closing
no longer angry
no longer caring
I fall asleep
and dream of your return.

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2001-07-29 10:50 AM

Sleep always claims one
if you want to sleep or not.
Nicely done

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

2 posted 2001-07-29 10:53 AM

The z monster wins again! A great piece!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-07-29 10:59 AM

Oh how I relate to this right now, well expressed. There's just something about the mystery and innocence of the night that conjures these intense yearnings and memories, isn't there?!~

Melissa~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-07-30 09:53 AM

eye lids closing
no longer angry
no longer caring
I fall asleep

this is a nice passage as it can be read..that eylids no longer angry no longer caring.... which I think is intriuing..

nice piece

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-02-21 12:44 PM

good one

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