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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-07-29 06:48 AM

Today's Tomorrows

I long to reach out
to ease your pain,
to help ease mine.

If you touched me tomorrow,
blindfolded,
I would know it was you,
for I am filled with rainbows
by your nearness.
Everything shattered
becomes whole again,
in your presence.

I long to walk beside you
in silence,
our time intoxicated,
even if for a short while.

My nights are measured
by small treasures, moments,
unveiled through your eyes.
As I turn each corner in thought,
I look beyond the shrouded mist of you.
And in the calm of darkness
embrace my dreams
and rock away in your thoughts.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 07-29-2001).]

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2001-07-29 06:54 AM

'I look beyond the shrouded mist of you.
And in the calm of darkness
I embrace my dreams'

This is quite beautiful.

Regards

jon

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2001-07-29 09:36 AM

nakdthoughts - your writing is most beautiful, as you...

BC

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

3 posted 2001-07-29 10:00 AM

I enjoyed this.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-07-29 11:11 AM

Wow - this moved me, well expressed, especially the ending verse~

Melissa~

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

5 posted 2001-07-29 11:12 AM

'If you blindfolded me tomorrow I would know it was you'...wonderful.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-07-29 11:25 AM

again, a wonderful epitome of love, trust, fidelity

I really like the part about how broken things are mended when this person is near

great piece here!!!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-07-30 09:51 AM

My nights are measured
by small treasures, moments,
unveiled through your eyes.
As I turn each corner in thought,
I look beyond the shrouded mist of you.
And in the calm of darkness
embrace my dreams
and rock away in your thoughts.
such a romantic and revealing passge... very nicely done..

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-07-30 10:26 AM

Very nice, Wynter, love the flow and the thoughts just build into a crescedo towards the end.
Sandra

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