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Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
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0 posted 2001-07-29 12:27 PM

No other love hast touched my soul as thee
No other heart sings so loving as thine
No other love tarried in my sorrows
As thou hast done, holding my tomorrows

No other love couldst fill my heart with glee
No other heart couldst find the rhythm of mine
No other love so sweet a celebration
In deepest anguish or jubilation

No other love hast stood this stormy sea
No other heart couldst beat with my rhyme
No other love the fortitude to share
This be my dedication to thy care

No other love ever shall I know save thine
No other heart couldst I hold for all time.

MM 8-27-00

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SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-07-29 12:55 PM

A timeless piece for a timeless love...the repetition seems to further emphasize this sense of an everlasting love. Lovely write

~Krista

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
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2 posted 2001-07-29 01:02 AM

Funny, but I was pondering eternal love when I wrote it...Thank you Krista...your comments are always appreciated!

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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-07-29 08:29 AM

A good song, a lovely write...looking forward to more!

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

4 posted 2001-07-29 09:18 AM

A nice read, sounds like you should keep that heart and never let it go, for no other heart could so compare.

Rick.

Keep up the lovely work.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-07-29 11:15 AM

It's true - a woman can have many loves in her lifetime, but, there is usually only one who holds the key to her heart and soul forever.

The devotions leaps out in this, and is classical in style with great flow and rhyme, this made me sigh

Melissa~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-07-29 11:21 AM

there you are again, capitalizing on your sweetness

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
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7 posted 2001-07-29 02:17 PM

Sunshine, thank you so much...could hear you hummin along!

Rick, thank you, yes it is true, I won't ever let this one go!

Melissa, thanks so much, I am so glad you could enjoy this one.

VAS, thank you...well, kinda hard to let my namesake down ya know?

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