Open Poetry #15 |
Gift of the Gulf Gull |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Gift of the Gulf Gull today I sat upon the beach my heart open for natures reach vastness of the gulf’s glory sweetness in its blue story then a sound heard from above echoed true understanding of when I heard, I was startled at first then lulling me, quenching my thirst it was the sound a gull makes as it soars over waves wakes I heard the sound, it was clear pulling me in, pulling me near it was the purest sound of laughter the simple joy we chase after blue vastness of a gulf remote laughter’s gift… a soul in float pictures provided by Bernie Slicker taken on Bradenton Beach on 7-27-01 "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 07-28-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is indeed a sound that pulls us in! Well done! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I did see the picture, but loved the poem! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I didn't get to see the pics, but the poem is quite fine...it pulled me back to a time, stepping out of the car in a supermarket parking lot. Someone was laughing, uproariously and I could see no one around that might share the joy or the joke. the laughter did not stop, I finally looked up and there atop the lamp post, high above the blacktop, a gull filled with utter delight in the day, I'd say. That was the first time it sounded as if a laugh to me. Glad you've heard it, too, cuz you've made such a lovely piece here. |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
no picture here either, but that's ok, I saw it and heard it through you. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Ok all,, so here's the pictures... sorry about that but geocities has a problem extracting pictures...... Hope you like the pictures that go with the poem. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Very nicely done poem. Delightful photos. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The ocean is one of the most perfect places of peace in all of creation. Your poem is a beautiful reminder of this. Deb |
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