Open Poetry #15 |
Share a moment. |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Come sit with me upon this rock that overlooks the sea Let’s talk about the heavens vast and how we came to be Come hitch upon this ride of mine, that’s travelled youth and years Come share with me a life fulfilled with wonders and of tears Come walk within this forest where the elves and goblins’ run Let’s share but moments, you and I, till night turns to the sun Come revel in the beauties that God has given earth Let’s sail upon those waters wide and find our call of worth Come share but just a moment’s truth, between your heart and mine Let’s share together but a touch, a kiss to last through time |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In this bit of sharing, the brief moment lends me to believe that there will be some stories to come from all of this... for every two lines read, I saw more... so come, share soon.... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunshine, we are so lucky to have our minds and visions of love. We are so lucky to have our penned words read and then reacted on. Thanks for your posting. The romance in my mind will continue. Rick |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rick~ What a lovely flow your thoughts conveyed. Quite romantically tender. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rick--Ah, very romantic...with an old fashioned flaire that I like. |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Rick, you made my heart sigh. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Rick, Such a romantic you are! This is beautiful! Tanya Dance like nobody is watching |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A true heartbeat of verse! I hope you have many such beautiful moments. Love smiles in this. Sincerely, Regina |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely, enjoyed,thanks. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A lovely cadence kissed sharing of anticipation, hope and dreams of love. Wonderful writing, and thank you for sharing jm slow burn ... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy this much |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Rick, this is very beautiful, the style, the flow, and the sentiment. Sandra |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Thank you everone for reading my work and replying with your wonderful words. It is much appreciated indeed and may you all find special moments of love. Rick. Nice to have a family of friends out there. |
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