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Open Poetry #15

figured out

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-27 05:01 PM

figured out

merely an illusion
or just vast
intrusion

into the set and
center of
your ways

and none of
the beguiles
that wiled you
before
will even
get me beyond
your door

o wait, I have
figured it
out and
now my
conclusion

I’ve always
been a
cosmic
delusion

Miranda
Junior Member

since 2001-07-26

Posts 32
OOOOOklahoma!

1 posted 2001-07-27 05:10 PM

I love the way it moves from being heartbreak to light and funny as it ends.
Cosmic delusion... lol
Miranda

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-27 05:14 PM

(smiling) Cute play on sound to drive home a serious message..nicely done Lady..

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2001-07-31 09:36 PM

Lady In White-
   Oh...I like!!...VERY much!
   Very cool write, my friend.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-07-31 10:17 PM

Enjoyed the tenor of this read. Nicely done.

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